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Thursday, January 19, 2017
Writing
We have been working on writing opinions in our classroom. Yesterday, we did a practice "on-demand" writing prompt. The prompt was, "A _________ is the best animal."
Check out the first grader's writing, and the comments from their classmates! We'd love it if you commented about our writing, too!
By Ava:
My cat is the best animal because 1. She's fluffy. 2. She does tricks. 3. She licks me. 4. She makes me laugh very, very, hard. That's why I think my cat is the best. I love her!
"I like her punctuation." -Emily
"I like that she has numbers for all of her reasons of her cat." -Campbell
"I like her writing because it has capital letters and lowercase letters." -Destiny
By Hanna:
Rabbits is the best animal because they are so cute. And so funny! And I love the way they smile. Do you like rabbits?
"I like that she has a question at the end." -Campbell
"I like rabbits too." -Xavier
"I like all of her punctuation." Autumn
"I like how she said, 'Do you like rabbits'". -Ava
By Nick:
I like penguins because they swim. And they eat fish. I like penguins.
"I like how he put some of the things he liked about them into facts." -Emily
"I like penguins too." Lucy
"I like how he writes." Noah
Check out the first grader's writing, and the comments from their classmates! We'd love it if you commented about our writing, too!
By Ava:
My cat is the best animal because 1. She's fluffy. 2. She does tricks. 3. She licks me. 4. She makes me laugh very, very, hard. That's why I think my cat is the best. I love her!
"I like her punctuation." -Emily
"I like that she has numbers for all of her reasons of her cat." -Campbell
"I like her writing because it has capital letters and lowercase letters." -Destiny
By Hanna:
Rabbits is the best animal because they are so cute. And so funny! And I love the way they smile. Do you like rabbits?
"I like that she has a question at the end." -Campbell
"I like rabbits too." -Xavier
"I like all of her punctuation." Autumn
"I like how she said, 'Do you like rabbits'". -Ava
By Nick:
I like penguins because they swim. And they eat fish. I like penguins.
"I like how he put some of the things he liked about them into facts." -Emily
"I like penguins too." Lucy
"I like how he writes." Noah
Wednesday, January 18, 2017
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